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Post by kyokyo on Aug 8, 2008 20:58:53 GMT -5
She went forward through the storm, cradeling the object in her arms so it didn't get wet. As she neared the meeting place, the object allowed her to see through the storm. She saw the boy, the one she was to meet. As she walked closer, she drew the hood off off her head {for the rain had let considerably} and the boy reached out with his hand. "Don't touch," she said, "Only look." She held out her arms, and revieled a small brown tabby kitten. It's eyes were a solid blue. The boy made to grab it, but as he did do the cats eyes turned red. Fire suddenly engulfed the boy. He turned to ashes before he was able to scream. "Don't touch," chuckled the girl, "It's magic."
((Yeah! I just had to randomly type! I could type more, but don't expect it))
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Post by Thunder on Aug 8, 2008 21:33:24 GMT -5
Crys this is really a good intro to a story! really it is. you have me intrigued. I want to read more. please post more!
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Post by kyokyo on Aug 8, 2008 22:06:55 GMT -5
The plains were scourching hot, the brown tabby cats's eyes the same bright red. The girl was tempted to take off her cloak because of the heat, but she couldn't risk the kitten touching her bare skin. The girl looked up at the sky, juding the time from the sun. "If we are not to our next meeting in a few moments time..." she muttered. She almost cursed as she came to a dead end. They were on a cliff, and now would be surely late to the meeting. At the abrupt pause, the brown tabby, moved his head to look at the cliff-side. Suddenly the tabby cats eyes turned a dark brown, and the earth in front of them started forming into stairs. They were easy enough for the girl to descend, but wouldn't shake the cat. ((lol thanks J-Shadow. I really dont think its very good, and they will prolly get worse as it gies along I love the kitty though!))
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Post by rebel! on Aug 8, 2008 22:11:01 GMT -5
Very nice kyokyo!
I don't think its crap XD
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Post by Thunder on Aug 8, 2008 22:17:23 GMT -5
Still amazing! and your doing a good job of keeping interest by not explaining! keep writing it! or else lol
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Post by kyokyo on Aug 9, 2008 8:49:33 GMT -5
Thanks, both of you ^_^
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Post by Thunder on Aug 9, 2008 9:31:47 GMT -5
your welcome!
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Post by rebel! on Aug 9, 2008 9:48:56 GMT -5
Its a very good story. i especially love that the boy got burned because he wouldn't wait just one second....XD
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Post by kyokyo on Aug 10, 2008 21:17:57 GMT -5
((Yes, that boy had some issues ^_^ now this boy is much cooler. lol))
The earth trembled around the girl, as if the quakes centered off of her. She had been walking for hours, and finally had spotted the next boy they were to meet. The tabby cats eyes turned from dark brown to a light brown. The tremors stopped, and the trees seemed to grow around them. The girl stepped up to the boy, and held out her hands to show him the brown tabby. His hands reached out for it, but he quickly brought them back. Something tempted him to touch the cat, but he felt as if it was a trap. After moment of staring each other down, the kitten mewed "Very well, you are the one we have been looking for." The bot almost jumped back, the cat had just spoken! "Finally," he continued, "I am able to control all of the higher beings."
In the long forgotten past, there was a man whom ruled over our vast world. He called himself God, and claimed that every animal was to follow him if they were to be blessed. The humans moved away from the man, calling him crazy. The animals stayed where they were, not sure what to believe. Only thirteen had the faith to step forward, putting all of their trust into the humble man. "We will trust you!" they called, "You seem like such an honest and sincere man!" "Then may you thirteen come to my realm where happinesss lay! In two days, follow this path to the clouds! I will be waiting" God called back, then walked up the path he had mentioned. The chosen thirteen were all excited. God was on their side, and they would be the ones who are saved! The all went back to their dens, waiting until the two day limit was up.
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Post by Thunder on Aug 10, 2008 21:32:42 GMT -5
*flashback* lol i love flashbacks! still good! love it keep writing! ;D
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Post by kyokyo on Aug 11, 2008 12:24:07 GMT -5
((LOL thank you. here it is!))
From the cliffside, you could see a whole city. A huge, human city, the lights shinging in the dusk. This was where the cat had been born, and lay forgotten on the side of a road. He had a strong hatred for the place, and decided that was where they would start. With a flash of white running through the girls eyes, the city exploded into nothingness. Space itself was destroyed there.
The rat was the first animal to speak up to God. He was a cunning creature, and wanted to be on the side of power. He knew that being the first one to Gods palace would help him be on Gods good side, so he needed to get rid of the faster animals. He knew that the fastest of the thirteen were the Ox and the Cat. The Cat was very trusting, and the Ox not very smart. A plan formed in the rats head, and off he was to Cats house. A little while later, the Rat entered the den of the Cat. "Oh, hello Rat!" the cat called, "I just wanted to see you! I was thinking that maybe we could leave when the sun is high to go to the Cloud-land? That way we had plenty of time!" "Oh yes indeed!" the Rat squeaked back, "I will alert the other eleven of our plans! I will see you in two days!" and the Rat left, the cat waving a paw behind him.
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Post by Thunder on Aug 12, 2008 15:31:26 GMT -5
INTREGE! keep writing it please:)
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Post by rebel! on Aug 12, 2008 18:56:36 GMT -5
I'm interested now...
Keep going!
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